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Monday 9 May 2016

Oscar F camping trip

Camping Trip 
By Oscar F.



I had a camping trip with my family on the holidays. When we first got to the cabin there were lots of black bugs on the lamp.  There were people outside and they were noisy. Next I went  outside on a big playground. It had a swing.  Then we went to a spa pool . It was relaxing. It was awesome. When I came back to Auckland I was tired. I had a fantastic time there.


20 comments:

  1. Hi Oscar,
    What fun you had on the camping trip. I would have been very scared of the black bugs. Swings are great fun. I love to swing. Did you go very high?

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  2. Hi Oscar I'm glad you enjoyed your camping trip. I would have been scared of the black bugs to. I love camping to. Were did you go camping? It was fun and funny.

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  3. Hi Oscar
    l liked your camping trip and l have a spa too and it looks very cool l like it. Who went with you in the camping trip? l think it will be fun.

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  5. Hi Divesh that sounds super
    fun and exciting. I feel like coming with you, but why did you want to go on this trip? I have been fishing once.

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  6. Hi Oscar,what fun you have so much fun.I'v never went camping before.I'v be scared of the black bugs.how did you get there?

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  7. Hi Oscar F I like it because you described how you felt after your camping trip. I like going to camping trips too. I went to a spa pool before too. How did you get there and when did you go there?

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  8. Hi Oscor.
    I hope you have a nice time.
    I'v been on a camping trip to.
    Whut did you eat there?
    I will re read and add more information.

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  10. Hi Oscar f
    I hope you had a nice time. I Iike bugs too Was the hot pols nice?

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  11. Hi Oscar F
    I hope you had a wendthell caping thrip and I wesh I went camping so that I code go on the playground but l haven't gon caping befor so that's why l won't to go caping and camping is so fun because you can sleep outside and you can put out fiya and I like camping it is so fun to camp but my mum dusent let me go camping outside.

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  12. Hi Oscar,
    What awesome time you had on your fun trip. I would be scared of the blackness. What was your favourite part

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  13. Hi Oscar f what a cool story.if I went camping will it be scare?

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  14. Hi Oscar.f, I hope you liked your camping trip
    I have been camping too Were you scared of the black bugs?

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  15. Hi Oscar, I hope you had a great camping trip. I like swings too.They can swing you high right. I really loved your story. I have been to a spa pool too and it was warm too. What else was on the playground.

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  16. Hi Oscar, I hope you had a great camping trip. I like swings too.They can swing you high right. I really loved your story. I have been to a spa pool too and it was warm too. What else was on the playground.

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  17. Hi Oscar,
    That sounded quite fun at your camping trip. I wish I went there and swings are one of my favourite things. I would be scared of the big black bugs. I been in a spa pool before and it was relaxing like you. Did you go very high on the swing? Why did you go there? Who went with you? When did you go? Was it very fun? Did you like the black bugs? What time did you?

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  18. Hi Oscar,
    What awesome time you had on your fun trip. I would be scared of the blackness. What was your favourite part

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  19. Hi oscar f i like your story did you like the black bugs on the lamp also did you touch the black bugs

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  20. Hi Ocasr F I go camping to it's fun going on a camping trip what did you do there?

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